What I liked about Mermaid Lake yesterday

My favorite things of Mermaid Lake yesterday was the Tug-of-War. Next, we went in for lunch, and I had a hot dog in there with potato chips. After lunch, we went swimming in the pool, and I got to go on the slide, and it was really cool. I also played Mini-Golf with some of the other 5th Graders and with Mr. DeLuca. This turned out to be a great field trip, and when we got back to Belmont Hills, my mom picked me up and took me home.

What directions I need to follow at Mermaid Lake and what I am looking forward to for tomorrow.

Tomorrow at Mermaid Lake, I need to bring a bathing suit for swimming. Also, I will go on the slide for swimming because I am big enough to go on the slide. For example, only tiny kids cannot use the slide because it is far too dangerous for them to use the slide, and they will get really hurt a lot. Another reason for the water slide is that you need to be big enough to go on the water slide so you will not get hurt. It will be my favorite thing to do tomorrow at Mermaid Lake.

Dylan looking for Max

There was a boy named Dylan who was walking to the woods, looking for his dog Max. All of a sudden, Dillain hears barking, and Max runs to Dylan and Max licks Dylan right in the face, and Dylan took Max home to live with him forever, and Dillain told Max, "I will never let you get lost anymore, Max." Then he gave Max a big hug, and they are happy to be together again.

What am I looking forward to these last 3 weeks of school?

I am looking forward to the 5th Grade Field Trip to Mermaid Lake Next Week. The week after that week is the Awards Assembly. On the last week I am looking forward to 5th Grade Graduation. After 5th grade graduation, the day after that I will have a graduation party. I will miss all my friends and teachers at Belmont Hills, and I will say, "I will hope to see you guys in Bala Cynwyd, and I will miss you very, very much."

Transition words

Tyler had a birthday party. First, he invited lots of people. Most of them came to the party. There were hot dogs and hamburgers to eat. Next, games were played. Soon, Tyler opened his presents. In conclusion, everyone wished Tyler happy birthday and left, they had a good time.

This weekend I went to Alec's birthday party. We went bowling at Wynnewood Lanes. When we got back, we had a soccer ball ice cream birthday cake for Alec. After cake, I beat Alec's brother, Zack, in Mario Kart Double Dash!! In conclusion, my mom and I went home to see how my dad was feeling.

Word Choice

Rain forests are vital. They are also ravaged. They have thousands of plants. They are also the habitat of many animals. Huge trees keep it shady. Many rain forests are in terrible shape. They are being destroyed. It's up to all of us to help stop this from continuing!

Transitions

The game was exciting. At that moment, the Wildcats took a big lead. Soon, the Bears tied the game. Afterwards, the game was tied until almost the end of the game. Next, the Wildcats scored 3 points. As a result, they won the game!